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This is the poem/ rap song that they would probably teach kindergardeners. The one below is a Limerick. The one below that is a Ballad. Others are just varios invented style poems. Which one should I do for poetry pot luck? Please vote in discussion.

Hey there dude, Don't be rude, That's not nice It's colder than ice yo....... Don't be mean, Said Ujene, That's real cruel, Don't brake the rules yo....... Don't be a jerk, Don't rob a clerk, Don't punch that kid, Said my friend Sid, yo.......



There once was a wee little boy, Who only played with one toy. One day the toy broke, When a bottle of Coke, Was knocked over by his brother Roy.

The Knight in Pink Armour. The Knight in pink armour, was a short little man, who rode not Camels, but Flamingos through the sand. He rode Camels through the swamps, and Kittens through the mountains, Parrots through the plains, and pigeons through the fountains!!!!!

Whoever made Invented style poetry, made it a bit too hard. It seems it's so difficult for me, I'll be permanetly scarred!

That actually //was// invented style poetry.

ICE CREAM Sold. Cold. PLANE Fly. High.

At the plate, swinging the bat, at the ball with concentration with hope with determination. Hit.

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Here is my third trimester piece! It's called the Shadow Catcher

Chapter 1__

It was a cold night, and the only warmth that could be felt was the heat being generated from the car. David flipped on the radio as he backed out of the driveway of his house. he took one last look at his house and thought to himself,//I'll see it sometime in a month or so.// Then he turned around and drove away. David picked up his cell phone and called control base. "Pennsylvania Control Base" "This is David Johnson, tell the conductors I'm on my way" David told the secretary. "Will do sir" she said. After a couple of minutes David took a right turn and stopped at a locked gate. He rolled down the window and pressed his thumb against a pad sensor. The gate clicked an opened. David drove through and the gate closed behind him. he drove down a gravel path, and after a few minutes he stopped and parked at the control base. Punching in a code number on security door, he entered into the building and went to the gear room. "Hello Mr.Johnson" "Hello, Donna" Donna had been the gear instructor for three years now for the L.P.A. (Launch Pod Association) "Let's get started. First we have your parachute.Put it on Like you would a backpack. Then, after you jump, count to five and pull the blue strap, if that doesn't work pull the red strap, and it will come out. Pen in hand, David was jotting down notes. "Understand?" Donna asked. "Yeah." "Okay, now for your glasses. After you put them on, you can push the green button, and you will see night vision through the glasses. If you push the blue button, you will see heat like a snake. That's it for your new gear, every thing else you've used before. "Okay" David exited the room and went to mission instruction room. " Good evening David" exclaimed the instructor. "Hello" David replied. "Now for your mission"

__Chapter 2__

Bang!! Vince Velane shot his gun at the ceiling of the bank."Everyone get down!" he yelled."you" he pointed at a woman with a bankers I.D."Lock the doors". She did as she was told. "Somebody give me all the money" The crowd on the floor was stone silent. " Do you think this is a joke?!" The criminal yelled and fired his gun at the celing again. A man finally stood up and said "I will give you the money". Vince was led into a room with an electric lock. The man punched in a code and led Vince to a safe, which was filled with cases of who knows how much money. Vince took out a big sack and put inside as many cases as he could fit in. By now, most of the cases were gone. The robber looked at the small crowd huddled on the floor to make sure nobody was dialing 911 on their cell phone. Then, he called on the person with the key to unlock the doors for him. His car was parked in a spot closest to the bank. Earlier he had stolen a temporary license plate from a new car and put it on his own, so if anyone tried to track him by using his license plate number, he would toss the temporary and put on the real one. So for now, no one can catch Vince.

Chapter 3

"Vince Velane" said the L.P.A. instructor. "Who's that?" asked David. "The man your going to try to put in jail. He's been spotted in Tiksi, a city in northern Russia. Vince Velane has been known for theft and armed bank robberies. When you get there, you may want to go to local police stations for more information." "What's the most commonly spoken language there?" David aked. " English' "Okay, thank you sir" David said to the instructor. "David, one more thing. This man is dangerous. Be careful" He thanked the instructor and left. As he was walking towards section B. he thought: //Why would someone want so much money? Why choose a place like Tiksi, Russia to get it?// Many questions about Vince Velane zipped around in his head. David pushed away his thoughts and got his gear. He opened a door to section C. and headed for launch pad. Once he finaly got there,he opened up the pod and stepped inside. David took a radio transmitter and signaled to the conductors. "Ready to launch" "Okay" Boom! David felt the pod shake when the gas whas ignited. Slowly he started to rise.

Chapter 4

Red and blue lights flashed in Vince's rear view mirror. He swore as he realized that he forgot to make sure that nobody outside the bank would notice the robbery, but he had a minor plan. Vince pulled over when the officers told him to. His plan would work under one slight condition.... good. The officer never told him to take the keys out of the ignition. Vince slowly inched his foot over to the ignition pedal, and once he felt it he slamed the gear shifter into revearse and stomped his foot on the gas pedal. A loud sound of metal crashing together rang out after Vince ran into the police car. Vince surged the gear shifter back into drive and put the pedal to the metal. Already having a good start, the criminal did some of the most clever driving of his life, and managed to escape the police. So yet again, nothing in Vince's way could stop him.....yet.

Chapter 5

Clouds flew by before David prepared for the jump. He would have to wait for a green light to flash before he could jump. Any minute now..... BEEP BEEP BEEP! The green light flashed. David opened the pod door, and the wind roared at him like a monster. He took a step and jumped. As he was instructed to count to five, he did. Once he was finished, he pulled the blue strap. Nothing happened. He pulled harder, still nothing happened. So he pulled the red strap.....That didn't work either

Chapter 6

Vince was thinking. //Where next? What store did well in business?// Days later there had been reports of stores getting robbed and people getting threatned, in the local Tiksi newspaper. Vince was driving in his car when something caught his eye. It was a round metal object, a little taller and wider than he was, and it was flying in the sky. Something was falling from it, and it landed in a prarie not far off. Vince managed to read what the object in the sky said; "Launch Pod Association". Pulling over, Vince walked over to where he saw the thing fall, but it wasn't there. Suddenly, a hand clamped over his mouth. He tried to fight back, but the arm was too strong. "Are you Vince Velane?" a voice said, but he could not see a face. "What's it to you?" Vince sneered. " THE BROKEN LAW, THAT'S WHAT IT IS TO ME!" the unknown captor shouted. Vince felt his captors grip loosen ever so slighly, so he kicked behind him with all his strength, and broke free.

Chapter 7

David stumbled back in pain from the blow, but Vince Velane was no where in sight. Dealing with the situation, David put on the glasses and pressed the button the let him see heat like a snake. Scanning the area, he saw varios waves of heat from other animals here and there, and then saw one big one slowly getting smaller and smaller. Vince was running! David whipped out his gun and started sprinting towards Vince. (He had gone through special forces training, so he could run very fast. Catching up, he aimed at Vince, and fired.